i left the store
and
saw the enthusiasm
on his face
as he
gathered up the carts
and ran
with
as many as he could push
and
then some
and
he was clearly strong
on the outside
but
just as he was hitting his stride
about to cross
the last fifty feet
into the store
a car
decided to back up
and
took a few tries to do so
and
a family
decided
to cross in front of him
and
a young couple
ran in his path
and
four more cars
drove in front of him
and
things
just kept coming
and
still he stood
patient
and
unflinching
just
waiting
and
when the path
was
finally clear
once more
he
slowly
walked the carts
back into their place
in the store
in a show of
personal
inner strength
endurance
and
will
and
having no idea
anyone noticed.
—-
patience, persistence and perspiration
make an unbeatable combination for success.
– napoleon hill
We’re on the same wavelength I think 🙂
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what a wonderful observation of someone doing his every day chore…pity the person doesn’t know that he was observed by such a perceptive person as yourself 🙂
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it’s something that’s within him, and i think he might have been shy if i had brought it up to him.
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I love the poem but also this great Hill quote. Definitely, slow and steady wins the race. 😀
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it does )
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That’s fun and very sweet
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thanks, roy )
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And wouldn’t he be flattered to know that you did? (notice) You make a simple observation on his task so human. Love it Beth
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thanks, he might be )
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Showed this to my son who’s home sick with flu – he’s thinking about doing “carts” to make extra money as he calls it – told him don’t think your efforts will go unnoticed! You could end up on a blog somewhere someday!
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ha! so true!
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i love that you noticed this. And am not a bit surprised. here’s hoping his next cart run flies by without a hitch.
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me too, on his behalf.
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Interesting observation. I feel for the guy who does this in the snow. 😦 With all those interruptions.
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me too, it’s really hard work )
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I pushed ONE shopping cart through the snow to my car last week. Man, that WAS hard work. Whew.
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It is really tough
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Sigh.
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What a good person. Carts in parking lots are such a pain.
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he certainly is and they really are –
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Awesome that you stopped and took the time to notice Beth. there are so many unsung heros out there.
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I was in awe of him and there really are, paul )
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This is wonderful, as always. I feel like your posts are little tidbits of life – tiny little slices of worthy moments that are ever so delicious to read.
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thank you for your very kind words ) beth
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I did. I saw him too. But you made him into a poem and I will never look at “the cart boys” in the same way. I will always think of them … as poems. Virginia
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thank you so much, viriginia.
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These wonderful moments are the best moments.
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I think they are too )
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What a wonderful slice of everyday life seen through a compassionate lens. You rock, Beth! 😉
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Thanks, ermine )
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Your awareness is inspiring and this patient man’s humble actions reveal beauty in the human spirit!
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They do, and thank you –
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Never before has a profile in cart courage been chronicled so well, Beth. Marvelous eye for detail in a needed and so little appreciated task. 🙂
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‘Profile in cart courage’- thank you
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See, this is why I try to return my carts to the front of the store, where they don’t have to be pushed in to anywhere.
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Excellent , Joseph.
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POETRY IN MOTION!!! bravo! <3!!
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Thanks, susie )
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I’ve seen this exact scene. You’ve captured it beautifully. I could feel him waiting.
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Thank you, dk.
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I imagined the scene perfectly but unlike you ‘carter’ I didn’t manage to stop the carts for the reversing car, so it all came to a halt quite badly. 🙂
Great use of this wonderful quote Beth.
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Oops! Thanks, tric )
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that is a beautiful poem.
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Thanks, Belinda )
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I could just sit and people watch with you all day long sista! The lessons are all around us, our’s for the viewing if we only take the time to stop and pay attention to them.
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Thanks, that would be great, faith. And you are so very right )
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Beth, I enjoy most all of your contributions, but this one was EXCELLENT! Very well-written! Great job, Kiddo!!!! 🙂
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Thank you so much, Lucien )
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Profound, in the sense that one could see great character, and inner strength … in the parking lot of a large store, a young man is joyous to run his carts. But he has to wait. I really liked this one, Beth.
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thank you so much –
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The way you see things is amazing and a gift, Beth. You saw so much more than most would… hugs to you my dear friend!
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thanks so much, robin and hugs back )
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i love this. 🙂
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thank you )
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Wow, Michigan must have been very boring that day. 😉
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always exciting if you look close )
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🙂
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Nice thought
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thanks –
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Awesome. Sounds like the cart herders at Costco. It’s so hard for them to get three feet at once. I imagine that kind of patience takes a lot practice.
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It must be a huge challenge –
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Perhaps I should apply for the job. Good penance!
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Hah!
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