while sitting
in the little waiting room
at my optometrist’s office
I looked up from my reading
as a man entered
the wave of his cologne
washing over me
my nose was overwhelmed
drowning out my other senses
I knew it was being absorbed
into my clothes, my skin, my hair
my eyes began to burn and water
luckily he was called first
I felt for the doctor
and was reminded of him
when I entered the examining room
where he had left his mark
moving on
toward his next unsuspecting victim.
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“i think it’s interesting that ‘cologne’ rhymes with ‘alone.’ “
-demetri martin
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Cologne and alone made me laugh!
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Not a pleasant experience!
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not for anyone in the path )
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Exactly!
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That li’l stinker! :))
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ha!
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Yikes. I’m feeling it from here! 🙂
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it’s on my keyboard keys! )
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Ewwww!
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I always want to tell these people that when we can taste it, you’re wearing way too much! Ugh.
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ah, when it crosses over to the other senses, that is a sure sign
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And there is no way in hell they don’t know this!
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I agree! Denial?
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Or “don’t-give-a-shittedness” 😉
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Men and women can taint a room with their cologne and perfume clouds for sure, Beth. My dear wife Karen and I wrinkle our noses, suffer tearing eyes and even move seats in the movie theater. Whatever happened to moderation?
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some people have different opinions about it, clearly )
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Who nose, Beth?
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I completely agree with you!
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Well said!
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The only thing worse than heavy cologne…. heavy cologne that’s being used (in vain) to cover up body odor.
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yes!
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Overdone cologne worn by either of the two sexes is overbearing. I, too, feel badly for the doc. Personally, I quit wearing cologne years ago, veered toward ‘magnetism’, instead…😎…😂
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luckily you have that going for you )
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I think I e been watching too much Tony Robbins 😂😂😂
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I quit wearing perfume except on rare occasions. I always found that less is more. When other people wear it so heavy, I can taste it. Yuck.
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yes, absolutely, less is always more in this arena in my opinion. there are some lovely scents out there, but a little goes a long way
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Sometimes, perfume is the culprit. But it doesn’t matter. What are they trying to hide?
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ah, that is the question ….
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I know exactly what you mean. Horrible experience. Your poor nose. That was the worst part. I felt as if I’d never get rid of that awful smell.
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it soaked into my every pore )
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As someone suffering from ‘hay fever’ but mostly allergies to many things, perfumed people are or can be a true and rather terrible problem to me. I once had to tell a dear friend that she mustn’t take my sitting somewhere else personally but that although I liked her perfume, I couldn’t cope with it. She was gracious about it, her husband said: But I like it; I bought it for her…. Well I should hope he didn’t pay a lot of money because he hated it on her! 😉
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oh!
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Btw, I had to insist that the guys at the garage did NOT put any air freshner spray into our car after the service and that they must NOT smoke while working in it…. To me the car stinks for two months after a service, HH can’t smell anything…..
And the rhyme doesn’t work that well, as you’d say Colognjè which doesn’t rhyme with alone…. but we give Demetri 5 points for trying 🙂
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exactly –
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This is a most interesting poem, Beth. It really does tell a story.
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Thanks, Roberta
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There is something to be said about subtlety but it sounds that he made quite the impression! love your observations!
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I think you picked the perfect illustration for this poem.
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Have you ever been swimming when someone gets in wearing cologne and not having had a shower? The taste is enough to make you gag!
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Uh oh!
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I miss cologne, but not that much…
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Great discussion on the chemical warfare men and women have come to accept as normal. Marketing has done a number on us and now everything is fragranced. Given that “fragrance” is a proprietary blend of chemicals designed to trick the brain into thinking it’s smelling flowers or fruit, mfr’s don’t legally need to disclose their ingredients. Anything can be hidden in “fragrance.” #cleanhasnosmell
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I hold my breath and move on…..
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There you go –
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Sometimes you have to sit with that person and can’t just walk on by. Passing by that person is like walking through a cloud of their cologne or perfume and it settles on your skin and hair, too.
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It does!
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HILARIOUS. There is NOTHING worse than an overload of cologne!
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you are so right, it made my eyes burn
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Oh dear!
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Yes –
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Eek! I can’t stand cologne or perfume of any sort. I can definitely relate.
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🦨
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I hate it when that happens! Especially when you get in the elevator and the offender has already left so you don’t even know who it was. 🙂
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That’s always bad
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your last line and Demetri Martin captured it perfectly! 🙂
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thanks, jim -)
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I’m glad I’ve never worm cologne 🙂
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Ugh. Sounds retched.
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pretty much –
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